Class evaluation

The Class helped
me a a lot , it help me with
getting my stuff in on time it allowed
me to write everyday and that is the only
way that your going to get better if you do some-
thing everyday , I enjoyed the teacher she was very
helpful and understand, she explained cretin aspect of the class
very well, and i also like how we got do d are work as blog to me
that was very cool and another way of learning. I really enjoy and learn
a lot I really think i am for the college level writing classes .

Stumble Blog The human Eye

Today when i stumbled upon this at first it was very wired and I was wondering if this
was real.
As i continued to look at the more and more I realized that it was real eye balls and it was
showing them up close.
To me i don't think that i would be able to let someone take a picture of my eye like that
and not blink.
The Cool thing about it ,was that you saw what you eye's might look like up close, and it also
shows how different you actually are then other people.
It show me that no one can never look like you simply because of your eye and that has a lot
do with the formation of you eye's the color,the way the grooves are in your retina,and also that
one eye is not the same as the other one.

Parts of speech

The eight parts of speech verbs, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, adjectives, prepositions, conjunctions, and interjections are defined on the pages hyperlinked below. Some authorities would not list interjections, but would list determiners or articles, instead. Three little words you often see are ARTICLES: a, an, and the.A NOUN's the name of anything,
As: school or garden, toy, or swing.
ADJECTIVES tell the kind of noun,
As: great, small, pretty, white, or brown.
VERBS tell of something being done: 
To read, write, count, sing, jump, or run.
How things are done the ADVERBS tell, 
As: slowly, quickly, badly, well.
CONJUNCTIONS join the words together,
As: men and women, wind or weather
The PREPOSITION stands before
A noun as: in or through a door.
The INTERJECTION shows surprise
As: Oh, how pretty! Ah! how wise!
The whole are called the PARTS of SPEECH,
Which reading, writing, speaking teach. 

Run-0n Sentences

       A run-on sentence, also known as a fused sentence, might just seem to be the type of sentence that goes on and on without a clear point, the technical grammatical definition of a run-on sentence is one that fuses, or "runs together," two or more independent clauses , basically, clauses that express a complete thought and could stand on their own as full sentences, without punctuation to separate them. They may have nothing between them, or they may have a coordinating conjunction (and, or, nor, but, for, so yet) between them but not the comma that needs to accompany the coordinating conjunction when separating two independent clauses.

Comma Splice

      A comma splice occurs when two or more independent clauses are joined with a comma but without a coordinating conjunction(such as and, or, nor, for, but, so, yet).A comma splice occurs when a comma separates two independent clauses.Another type of comma splice occurs when a word other than a coordinating conjunction is used with a comma to join two or more independent clauses.There are four basic ways to correct a comma splice.

• Revise by creating two separate sentences
• Revise by joining the clauses with a semicolon
• Revise by joining the clauses with a comma and a coordinating conjunction
• Revise by making one clause dependent or by turning one clause into a phrase

I learnd what comma splice are, and how to use them correctly and when and when not you use them.

Word Choice

What words you choose determine the tone of your work and how your reader responds to it. When you write, keep the following concerns in mind:

It is important to decide what tone you want to use to influence your audience’s response.

You must determine whether to use formal language.

Be sure to avoid jargon and euphemisms.

Avoid slang in formal writing.

Avoid cliché.

Avoid sexist terms that include or imply man.

Avoid condescending or possibly offensive labels.

Commas

A comma (,) is used to separate parts of a sentence from one another. Commas, when used correctly, make your sentences clear and help readers understand your meaning.Use a comma before a coordinating word (and, but, for, nor, or, so, yet) that joins two independent clauses.Also use a comma to separate three or more items—words, phrases,or clauses. A comma used to separate two or more adjectives that modify the same noun when they are not joined by a coordinating word.Use commas with dates, addresses, titles, and numbers. Use a for commas to separate direct quotations from the words that introduce or explain them.

Sentence Structure

The eight parts of speech verbs, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, adjectives, prepositions, conjunctions, and interjections are defined on the pages hyperlinked below. Some authorities would not list interjections, but would list determiners or articles, instead. Three little words you often see are ARTICLES: a, an, and the.A NOUN's the name of anything,
As: school or garden, toy, or swing.
ADJECTIVES tell the kind of noun,
As: great, small, pretty, white, or brown.
VERBS tell of something being done:
To read, write, count, sing, jump, or run.
How things are done the ADVERBS tell,
As: slowly, quickly, badly, well.
CONJUNCTIONS join the words together,
As: men and women, wind or weather
The PREPOSITION stands before
A noun as: in or through a door.
The INTERJECTION shows surprise
As: Oh, how pretty! Ah! how wise!
The whole are called the PARTS of SPEECH,
Which reading, writing, speaking teach.




 

Everything Stange

I like this blog site , i was very
different form any of the other blogs
that you had us read.Something on here
may have meant to be funny but was very
informational.The only thing strange there was
a video that was about birds that i did not get that
much that was a little strange to me.This blog is for
everyone who want a laugh or just look at strange things.
I would visit this site on the daily that's how much I like it.

Steve Dont Eat That

This Blog was not the best thing for some people to
look at early in the morining.Do i hate this blog no I
actually find it quit informationl to some and me.Some
of the questions I have is, why did you choses to write
about food like that? What was the purpose to the sock
demo?How did you gather all that information on this on
subject? The purpose was to imform others, about what
cartin food that you may not know a lot about and show
what happens to them after awhile.The audicane is everyone
but also the people who are willing to eat anything.

Fall Break

My fall break
Was very long and
boring mostly,but I did
some really fun things why
I was back home I saw my best

Dance Friends
I also got to got my high school home coming game with my Three half's of whole

That was some of fun things that i did but, i mostly worked and stayed at home
and went places with my father. I was ready to come by Tuesday I was ready to come
back to school I enjoy the freedom from my parents to much.But I will say I did miss them.

Intro To Prezi

I like the Prezi its very cool and it very different then a power point .
I like that you can put pictures up there ,and then bee able to message
or writings inside of the picture to make it look like it was suppose to
be there. Sometime it hard to get to work out right but i seem to get it  to
work right so far i like if for what it is.......

Free Blog

This is my bestfriend her name is Mom.

I tell her everything,she is my rock and

I missed her so much she have done more

then anyone ever known.The heart of a mother

is a deep abyss at the bottom of which you will

always find forgiveness. I i can only thank the man

upstairs for allowing HIM to keep her around for me

and my sister and brother.

Mid-term

I have learned how to re-read my work that i have writtin and also that I need to work on my senctence sturcture.Also that i not the best writer but i can work on it ,and be better at it if i work hard and do not get lazy.I discover that i actually like to blog and it is fun to do.Yes I belive that my writing is coming along very well and that I am doing a good job. It's not different its just easier beacuse its just something about paper and pincel that make you not want to write. I would like to say i like to your teaching methods and you are a nice teacher.

Ten year Ahead

I see myself own my dancing for one of the biggest dance company's
I see myself owning my own dance studio that is very well know
I see myself married to a beautful lady and having one amazing child
I see myself palying tennis with willimas sister on the regular
I see myself taking on leadership postions at the church that I will have
I see myself in right standing with GOD
I see myself ad one the wealthess people in the world
I belive in ten years this will come to pass because i belive and paryed
about what my heart desires.

Best Game of my life

My Favorite game is Super Mario 64

Why? because it was it was just a good

game back in the day. The graphics were

very bad but at the same time  it was a

good game to play. It had different levels

where you would play bowser and you

would play try to be him with your super

powers.Or the level where you have to

save princess , or where you  race the

pingune or where you had throw the bomb

to win the star.This was an all around good

Games of the 90's

My Favorite Moive "Jurassic Park"

This movies is on of the best I have every seen.

This movie have action packed adventures with

dinosaurs.I like this movie because it not an

ordinary movie that you would find that

people like I love the action and how they Incorporated

dinosaurs and the plot line of the movie it just a good

movie to me.

All what I Blog About

When I Breath Again

When I say

Breath again I

mean that I'll breath when

life slow down ,when I'm where

I want to be with GOD, When  my

college life experience is over, when life

does not take a toll on me anymore,and when

I don't think thet my happily never after have never

ended i will breath again ,I'll breath because its all over

I've done everything they say i couldn't do, I did every-

thing and more ,and when its all said and done I"ll breath 

for the next Generation that I will bring into this world and they

will live and breath without the problems that I had just BREATH..

Editing My Blog

Today in the editing process we used text changer,and that help me see how many actual errors that I make in my writings.The editing process to me sometimes I feel unnecessary but I at the sometime you don't want you followers not be able to under stand what you are talking about. So the editing process is very important and necessary.

Boots For The Mountian Weather

Today i StumbleUpone these boots which i found that were very cool and they were different from any regular boot.I believe that I've never seen anyone with these boots.These are the burnt red Ralph Lauren polo boot only soled in New York released in 2010.The web site found this on is called Davidz.com and i would want others to go here because they unisex boots and shoes at good price and the have very exclusive product.This is a very trustworthy site only because i have brought some shoes from them before.I also would like everyone to have some nice boot during the winter,even though it cold you can still be fashionable even in the mountains.

Good Blog & Bad Blogs

Some of the blogs that i read

form the other classes were

really good,but there can always

be improvements.On some of the

blog people back ground did not

catch my attention and, so that

made a bit boring to me.

In other blogs they were interesting had

lots of detail in there blogs and had thing that

related to the. The people who took the time

out to design there blogs to express the

really stood out to me.

I wont my blog to be like some of the other ones

i want my site to amaze some people.

I Commented !!!!

I commented for the first time and at first it did not let me comment until Miss.Sheffer came and did something so i could comment. I comment on onkia's blog bout the flash mob

and which I love it, I wish that i was in target that

day so i could have been apart of that.

I wish we did suff cool

like that.

Error's in Writing

Today I learned that many people make command mistakes

in there writings that they feel, that is normal to them.Today

in class we had to record one of our writing and pick out the

errors that we commonly make.In doing this I found, that i do not

always put in commas in the right place and also, do not use the

right words, mean that the sentence is incorrect. I found out that

I need to slow down and take my time with writing because that's

when you make most of the command  mistakes.Also in my writing

I figured out that I think about what i want to say but it does not make

it on to the paper correctly. So 1) Slow Down and take your time

2)Re-read you sentence 3)Make sure that you put commas in the right place

Blowing away

This picture explains a lot of emotions that some people when they dance

This picture give me the feeling that i just want to blow away with rain,

That life is taking a toll on me and I'm a blank slate that one care about just

here with on point of on destination no directions.

The thing that most stick out to me is the scenery, the photogaphary chose a good

place to capture this photo, and the model her self did good , her expression was so good.

The Center of it all

When watching the video for the movie Center Stage i realized that i wont to be where these people were and are.Nothing really new the to me but it's always good to watch again and again.I would recommend this to a classmate so  the would under or get a better feeling about dance. Also to pursed the that dance is the best why of expression.The videos site is very trustworthy,it is YouTube.I wont to know what other people think about dance? I wont then to see that dance have many different styles and animations to it. So ask yourself this question, what would you do if you were center stage?, what would you do ?,  how would you feel?, what is the emotions going thought your head?

This is me center stage of it all.

Who am I

My name is Isaac Xavier Blakeney IV, I was born and raised  Charlotte North Carolina on September 25,1992. I am the third child out of three, as a young child i was very active in a lot sports and actives. At the tender age of 9 i realize what i wanted to be and be come for the rest of my life was a dancer. So i was put in company for many years. As i got old i got out of the dance company and went to a performing arts school were i developed and improved my skill. At the age of 16 i return to a dance company that was very small and not time consuming.Today were I am is I'm still a dancer and will all ways have that fire for it, also i play tennis very well, also I'm a freshman at Lees-McRea College where i studying Chemistry with a minor in performing arts.

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